Poetry Showcase

The poetry showcase is dedicated to presenting a fully documented writing process of a single new poem by Eric Adriaans.  Each draft of the poem will be provided as will any relevant explanatory detail.

About the numbering of the drafts.  The first, typically handwritten, version of the poem typically consists of hand-written notes, phrases and words to be included in the poem.  That is version 1.1.  The first transcription of those notes to electronic format is version 2.1.  Any subsequent editions are numbered 2.2, 2.3 etc.  Whenever a significant gap of time occurs or a significant new concept or theme is taken, the numbering will move to 3.1.

BX (draft 2.2)

the ladder is locked

the watchtower is closed, a relic of yesteryear’s community

yet still there are the watchmen, turning their blue collars up to the wind

sucking on cancer sticks, sticking drugs and chemicals in their veins

dropping ten years just like their fathers did, though the method’s changed

painting their lungs and livers black right there beside the tracks

tracks that no longer carry trains to and from cities; cities that never did care

they haven’t yet begun to cry out to the Goddess of Death

but everything about them cries out to her,

Nuestra Senora de al Santa Muerte,  and she’s coming, though the trains never will

I can smell the death blowing up on southerly winds

fanned by a jet-fuel exhaust stink

while we stare gape-mouthed, agape as it were,

in the face of an inheritance that is flash-forward tribalism

the ladder is locked

the promise of progress is forgotten

while the lesser sons and daughters of empire,

the disinherited ones, stare not off into the distance

watching for trains that never will come

BX (draft 2.1)

the ladder is locked

the watchtower is closed, a relic of yesteryear’s community

yet still there are the watchmen, turning their blue collars up to the wind

sucking on cancer sticks, sticking drugs and chemicals in their veins

dropping ten years just like their fathers did, though the method’s changed

painting their lungs and livers black right there beside the tracks

the tracks that no longer carry trains to and from cities that never did care

they haven’t yet begun to cry out to the Goddess of Death

but everything about them cries out to her,

Nuestra Senora de al Santa Muerte,  and she’s coming

I can smell the death blowing up on southerly winds

fanned by a jet-fuel exhaust stink

while we stare gape-mouthed, agape as it were,

in the face of an inheritance that is flash-forward tribalism

the ladder is locked

the promise of upward mobility is forgotten

while the lesser sons and daughters of empire

the disinherited ones stare not off into the distance

About the Poem

In 2017, Eric Adriaans decided to write a series of poems based on local culture, landmarks and locations in St. Thomas, Ontario.  Conceptually the series is titled the St. Thomas Suite and may form the basis of an upcoming printed collection. Other poems in the series include:

  • St. Thomas New Year’s Ghost Story
  • Magnolia at Sunset
  • Lilacs After A Spring Rain
  • Pinafore
  • A Walk at Port Stanley Beach

The BX Tower was built in as a watchtower to reduce the probability of rail accidents in the busy rail community.  The brick tower was built in 1910 and remains a unique historic feature of St. Thomas.  Learn about the St. Thomas BX Tower.

The poem was conceived and composed within 60 yards of the rail-lines which continue img_0270to bisect the town of St. Thomas, Ontario and a two-minute walk from the BX Tower itself.

Like St. Thomas New Year’s Ghost Story, the poem explores the contrast between St. Thomas’ early history as a thriving industrial/rail community and its current status as a struggling small Canadian city.

Writing Method

BX Tower began with a photo (at right) of a feature of the BX Tower in St. Thomas, Ontario.  Eric Adriaans had been interested in photographing brick architecture for several years. In this photo, a ladder for climbing to the top of the small building was closed-off by a metal mesh cover and locked.  The notion of this locked ladder led to a hand-written list of words, ideas and images that this locked ladder might represent.  This list was then transcribed to a digital word processing file and extended into blank-verse lines.

See Also

References and Citations

  1. https://www.vice.com/en_us/article/4w7pzd/our-lady-of-the-holy-death-is-the-worlds-fastest-growing-religious-movement-456

Article History

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Poetry Showcase: BX

  1. Original Draft: June 12, 2018
  2. Updated July 22, 2018

 

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